Wednesday, October 22, 2008

A time my world changed

Flights in Fifth Grade

By: Derek Lund

The morning dawn arrived early,

day six of fifth grade.

Walked through the morning dew

crisp September morning,

the sunrise


burned


disparate colors.

Cheerful smiles were inverted

my teacher

everyone


weeping.


The T.V. also


burned


with the flames,

of the world trade.

Wednesday, October 1, 2008

Longer short story- Bloodbath in Baghdad

Bloodbath in Baghdad
By: Derek Lund

“It’s their time, kill them unless they tell us who the terrorist is in the next five minutes,” Our captain told us, as we stood there shaking. I can’t be the villain here, at home; I’m just nineteen-year-old Westly Neil. Here, in Iraq, I am Private Neil Second Class, Phantom Regiment.
I came from a small town, hoping to get the feeling of adventure, and danger from the army. Well the danger part sure as hell came true, but this isn’t the dream I wanted to live, killing innocent civilians.
Out of my entire graduating class I am the only one out of the 134 to go in to the army. The other 133 either went straight to working on their farm, or went to the local university. Instead of my innocent soft baby face, I am now war torn, unshaven, dirty, and scarred with the murder of other humans.
Now here, in Iraq, you never know who the real enemy is. It could be the young adults that you can connect to, they are the enemy, it could be the middle aged father of three, it could be the old woman you help across the street, hell, and it could even be that little baby laying in its carriage. That’s why we are stuck on this cross road of perdition. These twelve men, women, and children are all accused of being the terrorist.
“There has to be another way to find this out sir!” I said to my captain trying to settle this rationally instead of massacring the innocent.
“No, there isn’t any other way, these Muhammad looking people are savages, they feel neither guilt nor remorse, shoot the sons of b******,” he said in a soft disappointed tone. “You just want to go see Allah isn’t that right Muhammad?” he started screaming at the young Iraq man.
“Whose the terrorist!? Please tell us, we don’t want a massacre on our hands!” I screamed at the young male. They wouldn’t listen, nobody would.

“F***! Dallas, this is dumb, most of these people are completely innocent.” I said to the soldier next to me.

“Don’t question those orders, they have one minute, if they are willing to die to protect the terrorist, that makes them terrorists!” Dallas yelled back at me.

“They don’t even know what we are saying Dallas!” I argued.

“Too bad, its time fellas lock and load.” Captain ordered.

This was it; we aimed our guns at the innocent hostages. I breathed deep. As my body shook with the fear of what would happen to us next.
“Ready. Aim. Fire!” screamed the captain.All 15 of us pulled our own trigger simultaneously. I dropped to my knees then after knowing that I had just killed an innocent person, and even worse. It was a kid no older than myself. He, too, was unshaven, dirty, and scarred from the war. An innocent young man was killed here today with those hostages. His name, Westly Neil.

Monday, September 22, 2008

lets talk about me for a minute

so many of you may ask why is derek lund limping today? and why is he not putting any weight on his right foot. Well pop a squat and I'll tell you. This last saturday, if you did not know this i am in marching band, while marching i rolled my ankle. Now I thought I just hurt it, when i called my doctor however, I found out I dislocated it so yeah... if you wanted to know thats the reason. If you didnt well TOO BAD WHY DID YOU READ THIS POST THEN!

55 word short story

Russian Roulette
By: Derek Lund
I put in the one round, one round into the eight shot revolver. After spinning the cylinder I gave the gun to my friend. All of us had a one in eight chance to live. It came around to me; I heard no click like the rest of them. I heard a bang
.

Wednesday, September 10, 2008

10 minute play (no title yet)

[A family of 5 is moving their eldest son JESSE into his dorm for his freshman year of college. MOM,DAD, his younger sister AMANDA, and his adopted youngest brother DAVID, all except DAD are trying to convince JESSE to leave and move back home]
MOM
[worried]
Oh my, these rooms are hideous, honey do you really want to move in here? It’s only a 30 minute drive from home, can’t you just live with us?

JESSE
[stops unpacking]
Mom! Of course I want to stay here, I need to get out of that house. [Continues unpacking] This school is perfect, you won’t need to worry about me at all.

DAD
[quietly to JESSE]
Jesse, don’t listen to your mother, she just needs to get it threw her thick skull, your not a damn child anymore. Don’t worry I got your back. [to MOM] Sweetpea, he will be fine here the dorm advisers are super strict, there won’t be any girls [winks at JESSE], drinking [winks again], or drugs [he becomes completely serious]

AMANDA
[Laughing]
Dad, do you honestly think Jesse will ever even be able to talk to a college girl? I mean look at him. I agree with mom at least if he moves home he can go cry himself to sleep in his room….

JESSE
[giving a bear hug that is meant to hurt]
Ohhhh, I’m going to miss you the most Amanda.

AMANDA
[Still in a bear hug, and in now obvious pain]
Ouch! Mom, did you see that? Why is your son such a jack ass?

[DAVID is now trying to say something but no one pays attention to him]
MOM
Amanda am I going to have to wash your mouth with soap? What have I told you about talking like a sailor.
DAD
Ah, let her swear she’s grown up enough to know when the right time is and when it is not the right time. I mean hell, I was swearing at age 10 [very proud of his not-so-good accomplishment]
[DAVID is now screaming for attention, gets fed up, sits on floor and raises his hand]


JESSE
David, stop screaming if you wanted to say something just belt it out.

DAVID
All I wanted to see is if you were going to miss me too Jesse. Are you?

JESSE
[goes back to unpacking after arguing]
Huh?...Wha?...

DAVID
I asked, are you.?

JESSE
Mom! You folded my underwear [pulls out a pair of HUGE whity tightys] Why do you do that?
So, this is my first draft and is not yet complete, i hope you enjoy and it will be fully complete in a couple days!